it's okay.
It's okay, but i have to agree that it's more like a gameboy or genesis game boss fight soundtrack. it is almost a cheery song. also, the thing that comes in around around 20 is really anoying. i suggest using a different instrument. You have potential, but you really didn't hit the spooky part ( you got the light thing around 35) the comment bleow me said most of it.
again u have potential, so keep at it.