Room for improvement, but good job
This song is very well done, but there is room for improvement. I think that the little octave thing in the background is a little too loud. make that a little quieter, and it'll be a better support, and i'll be ableto hear the melody better. I also recommend consider changing the ending. I'm not a big fan of the way it just cuts out. All in all though, a nice song. 7/10, 4/5
Dvorask